After having my storyboard critiqued, it has been decided that my design has so much going on in every frame that the emotional and deep message is lost and overwhelmed. I'm going to extend the length of my message to be longer because I feel like how it is now, it is short and doesn't really make sense. So altogether the quote from the Kate Nash song;
Sometimes I wish, Sometimes I wish I was like Mariella. She got some prittstick and she glued her lips together so she never had to speak. People used to say she's as quiet as a mouse, she just doesn't make a peep.
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