So here are my adjusted projects. I couldn't find my rhythm one (unfortunately) and due to the fact that I only had a limited amount of time to redo these adjustments, I just worked on my message in motion and the dream animation.
Here's Message in Motion;
Above is the first version I changed. I totally deleted the previous video that I had. I did my best to edit out all the frivolous movements and the changing backgrounds. I tried to keep each scene of words at the same timing. In the end it was still kinda missing it's message so I took the feedback that I got and changed it again by changing the color of some of the words.
So here is the second final version;
Here as you can see, I added some color to make some words blend in and others stand out. I adjusted the words mouse and peep to a lighter version of the pink background to make them soft (like their meaning). I also changed the color of Mariella to white so that you could see the "I" in it. That shows how the person singing the song wishes to be more like the confident Mariella.
Second is Ryan's Dream;
The first one was way too all over the place, and I agree after watching it again. It's just really hard to keep up with. So I got rid of the word movements but I kept the bulk of the image movements. Here it is.
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